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So the second draft is done. There is more editing ahead, and the afterword will probably be redone to take account of ongoing developments in Darfur. But the back is broken, the end is in sight etc.

My publisher has read the manuscript. But she knows what to expect. There are typos, occasional bouts of muddled thinking, things to be fixed. She has seen it all before and can see the finished book lurking beneath the odd screw-up.

Now though I have to widen the circle. And it's a nerve-wracking business. A couple of trusted friends have been sent the book for their general thoughts. And this week it has been going to the people whose comments may or may not appear on the cover, exhorting you to pick up this book - from all the other millions available - invest a few quid and actually read the thing.

Some are experts in Sudan. Some are experts on Africa. Some have had books published. Some know their name adds hundreds, if not thousands (I can dream), of sales. They aren't going to endorse any old rubbish. Their reputations are at stake. Some are friends. Some I have interviewed at different times. Some are friends of friends. All I respect.

What happens if they don't like it. Will I be getting emails that begin: "Thanks very much for a chance to read your, erm, interesting take on Sudan. On reflection, I feel that it isn't appropriate to be associated with this sort of..."

Of course I'm being stupid. Of course the book is almost as good and as readable as I could have made it. I've spent five years of my life working on Sudan and although I know I'm not an academic or an expert, I do reckon I have a thing or two to say. The one endorsement that I've had so far is in fact one of the most important, from one of the leading Darfur watchers. He likes it. So far so good.

Suddenly though, after years of being the critic, the unelected, unaccountable journalist-pundit offering opinions in the papers, on the radio or on my blog, the roles have been reversed. And it is an uncomfortable place to be.

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Michael Logan | July 24, 2009 10:08 AM | Reply

So when is the book likely to hit the shelves so I can invest a few quid in it?

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Aden Ali | July 24, 2009 3:32 PM | Reply

Rob! I hope the book will answer a puzzling question about Darfur - why did major population centers did not witness fighting? The atrocities happened in rural Darfur and the villagers sought asylum in the urban areas of Darfur where IDP camps are all located, etc...The only fighting in a major town reported was one clash at El Fasher airport in February 2004...

Actually, the IDPs were given land, aid agencies were invited in to serve them and there was peaceful settlement in the IDP camps during the onset of violence. Who takes the credit? There is some sort of heroism from the police in the major towns because they helped prevent Rwanda style neighbor-hacking-neighbour or Somalia style neighborhood fighters clan cleansing that reaches every where....it seems the conflict of Darfur was controlled somehow somewhat...The mix of tribes and ethnic arab and african descents in all towns and cities in Darfur (38 major towns) is never upset despite the conflict. Some local authorities claim the failure of containing he conflict in the rural areas was because government had no sufficient resources to police all Darfur..hence the collapse of co-existence in the rural areas...GoS authorities acknowledge there was a counter insurgency operation but deny that it ever targetted civilians...I wonder if you can cover a bit about the impact of the conflict on the customary law that used to help support social coexistence amongst various ethnic and tribes in the region....

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Mr Graham Holliday | July 24, 2009 4:12 PM | Reply

I think I might just enjoy the sound of your nerves jangling and sweat dripping as you await the reaction to your tome more than your blog. And you still owe me a pint. I have not forgotten.

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Rob Crilly replied to comment from Aden Ali | July 27, 2009 8:20 AM | Reply

You raise some interesting questions, some of which will be covered in the book. I guess the general point is that the widely-accepted narrative of an Arab genocide against African tribes seems to miss the reality of what happened. If it was really a genocide would IDPs have clustered around government towns, filled with soldiers apparently intent on extermination?

That said, one of the lasting and most pernicious aspects of the conflict is the breakdown of relations between tribes and the erosion of the traditional mechanisms for resolving disputes. This is a bit chicken and egg, as it was Colonel Gadaffi's message of Arab supremacism that helped cause this breakdown and sparked the wider conflict. At the same time the past six years has completed this damaging process so that it is difficult to see how things can go back to "normal".

Any successful resolution of Darfur's conflicts must start with getting all the tribes talking to each other, setting out their needs and claims, before we move on to getting rebels and government to the negotiating table.

What do you think?